A Terrible Place

A Terrible Place

A Poem by TheBubbleManiac
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I don't know what to do anymore...

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I am in a dark place
Shaking in fear
I have let the world know something
A terrible secret no one should hear
This secret is of someone
That is held dearly to my heart
Now I do really fear
That they will rage with anger
My heart is racing 
I cannot focus on a single thing
I feel like I'm drowning
Sinking slowly to the ocean

Eyes slowly are closing
As the chaos slowly arrives
I cannot see anymore
Now I shall blindly wait
Never knowing what will happen
For now I shall lay here in fear

© 2016 TheBubbleManiac


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Wow! You have done a wonderful job in conveying the fear through your words.
I assume it is about a sitauion where a secret has slipped out of mouth and now you are ready to do anything to take those words back.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheBubbleManiac

10 Years Ago

You are exactly right! Thanks for the review!

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TheBubbleManiac
TheBubbleManiac

Polkville, NC



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At first, writing really wasn't my thing. But a special friend of mine got me into some really interesting books, which showed me the way into the writing world. From then on writing has always been m.. more..