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A release of emotions from the loss of a loved one.

Loud nights in empty rooms.
Tracing over old wounds.
Praying that God helps me through.
Oh Grandma, I feel abandoned by you.

Heavy emotions.
Overwhelming thoughts.
I can’t focus on the moment because I always feel lost.

I don’t know rather I’m coming or going, nor would I rather be here or there.
I do know one thing that’s abundantly clear; Life without you seems quite unfair.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear poet. We are almost neighbors. I live in Clinton Twp. I was born in Detroit in 1958. I do understand the poetry. Our mentors, the kind people. We need and when we lose them. Heavy on our heart.
"Heavy emotions.
Overwhelming thoughts.
I can’t focus on the moment because I always feel lost."
I am old and the above lines. I do understand. Powerful and worthwhile poetry shared.
Coyote

[The Diamond Effect]

Your words leave a residue of wisdom. I’d love to hear you recite in person. Do you actually perform your poetry? I’m finding my voice to do more than just write it but speak it and become it so eloquently that everything I say sounds like poetry!

[Coyote Poetry]

I do when I can. Hard to find places to recite poetry. Utica Library and Sterling Heights do poetry reading on occasion. We need to excite the Detroit area to awake to the poetry and song. I do have YouTube videos. I have enjoyed your poetry.

[Kita Capri]

I felt like I can really relate to the seep meaning in this poem. Beautiful! :)

[The Diamond Effect]

I appreciate your kind words 🤎🧡