Lost and Found

For Lovely. This is my anniversary present to her. Happy seven months!

I lost myself in your heart,

Or, was it in my own?

Could I be forgetting who I was?

I was changing shape-

Becoming a new person.

Oh, I was scared.

Would I change beyond recognition?

My being was melting,

Filling the spaces in you,

And completing both of us.

Was I foolish and blind

For not knowing

All that I had missed before?

All of this wonderful love

That I never thought was for me.

I was relieved to discover

That I fit with you so well,

No matter how I had to change,

For the changes made me better

And I would do anything for your love.

No more doubt; I know where I belong!

I found myself in our conjoined heart.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww this is so sweet so romantic and cute. Was full of emotion and came straight from your heart. I loved it, this girl is lucky to have such a sweet romantic guy.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Aww, that's so sweet that you wrote your girlfriend a poem for your anniversery

[Fallen Angel]

Its beautiful and sweet, really touched my heart

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is a really beautiful piece of yours and it's wonderful that you'd write this for your girlfriend. I bet she'd love it since it's magnificent. I'm always reading sad and depressing heart-ache poems but for a change I get to read something sweet and joyful.
Great job! :D


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Secret Lullaby]

awwwww I bet she loved it! This was really good (:

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the journey described and the wisdom in the ending of the poem. Life allow us to learn and become more wise. I like the positive ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Yina]

Awww that is te sweetest thing I've read in a long time!! It touches me somehow...:) Amazing!