oxygen

i am fragile

polluted often with unkind faces and insincere words

the everyday toxins have made me decay and fall apart

but no one listened and no one cared

until you came along

and what once malnourished and dead 

became green and restored

when you’re around i cannot let go

i refuse

you are my life source

my oxygen

so i breath you in and fill my lungs

and hold my breath when you go

Author's Note

im so fucking in love

Pardon me

Reviews

[Gianna Y]

I love your ability to perfectly pin down your feelings in your writing while also conveying mine as well! It was a very good write and I enjoyed reading it.

[Jordan's Back]

This is such an expressive way to convey love. you penned this very well. excellent write.

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was awesome. :D I'm feeling the same exact way right now, so I really enjoyed this. The name and the whole poem is so creative, as well. Good write :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is an amazing piece. The emotion draws you in and hurts. Your style reminds me of Evanessance.

[TheGreatAndPowerful]

Well that makes me feel good cause I enjoy that band. Thank-you

[R. L. Hill]

Hahaha. This is a great love poem. I love the first stanza and how it contrasts so much with the second. My only suggestion would be to add to the second and make it a bit more fleshed out - focus more on the love than the disease of being alone. Make sense? Love it, though. Enjoy the feeling!

[TheGreatAndPowerful]

Yeah, I made it a little too sad. But thank-you for your review!

[Kaen Shukketsu]

Oh really? Who might that be with?

[TheGreatAndPowerful]

Oh gee I wonder