Limitless

'As long as I'm human I will dream.

As long as I'm alive I am limitless.

Dreams are possibilities'.



Keep The Faith

 

Wake up to lights of coral tint,
unstrung mind in replete abyss.
He knows there’s more to life than this;
crying from tearless eyes and fighting thin
so he runs the shores and scars his skin,
and opens the door to let God in.
Rebirth of one so delicate and felled
into a robust revolt as life propels.
He lets the timing make him well.

Destroying body with smoke and pleasure,
through limitless life and seeking treasures
making marvel from paper and letters.
On each fine day the sun comes out,
as his boundless eyes come around.
He’ll fight till his bones fall to the ground.
He abides and lives harmonic hymn,
he opened up to chance and dream
and lets the heavens make plans for him.

Reviews

[Mia]

I waited a while before I came back to your page and catch up because I was still touched by your review…and while I know it won’t make me say things I don’t mean…I never want you to doubt what I say…I always say what I honestly think! JB! When I read this the first thing I thought was “how is it that the writer of this would ever wish he had written something of mine” and I’ll admit it sounds like I have self-esteem issues. I promise I don’t…I proud of what I write.
“so he runs the shores and scars his skin,
and opens the door to let God in.”
You were born to write of this I am sure and it’s incredible that I get to read your stuff…that I get to comment and that you care what people say…this poem is incredible
“he opened up to chance and dream
and lets the heavens make plans for him.”
My brother and his friends always say ‘live free and prosper’ to each other…this is a live free, die free and always prosper!

[TheJordBaker]

thank you Mia :) as always it means so much. You've given me a problem however as I'm collecting pieces for my new book and hadn't considered this one at all but your kind words now mean I must :p
On a side note- I hope you are proud of what you write, I look forward to reading your new poems and you are very talented. We can all learn from you as you others, such is the beauty of this place :)
-JB

[Mia]

Yes you must!!! It would be an injustice not too...another book :) that's very exciting!!

[Bluefire]

This is a beautifully written interpretation of a life.
I love the word choice, this is one of my favorites.
Thank you for sharing this.
Great poem, great work! ^^

[TheJordBaker]

thanks very much :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn, this is a good piece of writing...

all that we partake in here on earth is nothing compared to what we prepare for when this mortal coil is shaken off...

there has to be something afterward...i think something much like Eden was before the fall.

nicely written piece..."runs the shores and scars the skin" really like that line.

jacob

[TheJordBaker]

thanks as always Jacob, always appreciate your feedback.