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A short simple verse. I think the title and last line sums it up.

The ardent wish
upon a shooting star
from a dreamer’s eyes
and the will of the sun
each day to rise.

In this substance
we are life.  

Author's Note

In existence, we are everything.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love it...don't really need the explanation...like the abstract quality without...

open to interpretation...

i for one am glad to wake up each day...and have another to enjoy as much as possible, to accomplish as much as possible...to be me as much as possible.

existence is well worth a thank you...to that eye in the sky watching us, looking out for us.

[TheJordBaker]

Thanks for your great words as always Jacob.

[Mia]

This reminds me of lyrics...
"For all the air thats in your lungs
For all the joy that is to come
For all the things that you're alive to feel"

Just do me a favour and change the description to short, simply beautiful verse… thanks!

[TheJordBaker]

thanks again Mia, you're awesome :)

[shallimarRose]

I agree sums it up nicely. Short but direct. thank you. shallimarRose

[TheJordBaker]

thanks very much :)
-Jordan

[shallimarRose]

You're welcome Jordon.. Rose