Design

A poem about perfection in the eyes of imperfect. Like most, it is about a girl.

Design, can you give your time?
Design, can you hear my voice?
Design, can you hear my voice?
Design, do I even have a choice?
Design
  What are the words I'm looking for,
I know by looking at you I've never been sure!

Design, I cannot add to your beauty.
Design, can I give one last touch?
Design, you are a part of me.
Design, I'm not asking for much.
Design
  I can still think of you,
I know that I can still find what to do!

I've given so much thought,
to every design I've got.
I've given the world all I can.
I'm only one Christian man.
God has carried me so far,
Now the rest is in my arms.

Watch
As I laugh.
Bliss
This is happiness.

I'm close to gone.
A goodbye from the phone.
It's not the way it should be said.
It's too late though. I am dead

Author's Note

This is actually lyrics to a song I wrote a few months back.

Reviews

[Ella]

Again I love it, I would die to hear this put to music.
"Watch
As I laugh.
Bliss
This is happiness.
I'm close to gone."
Love these lines and to me they speak to me because it is kind of what I feel right now, which to me makes this song even better because it can connect, and I am assuming not just to me. Amazing :)

[TheLastEclipse]

Why thank you so much. I appreciate the review!

[Ella]

You're very welcome :D