Like Killing A Newborn

A song about the girl whom drove me insane, and the product of my insanity.

Never been so easy to crush it all.
Make you believe in my faith and then you fall.
watch as the lightning hits the ground.
Then you're voice tends the crying sound.

Begging for me,
knowing not to trust me,
What can I say I guess I have a special allure.
Can't you see me,
as this evil being,
I only want to crush your hope!
And let it enfold you.

In the dark we wander on.
It's so familiar I guess we've been here after all
We're used to the parading silence,
And the things that can't be seen for miles.
It's just a sense of you and me.
Someone loved and one that is unbelieved.

YOU KNOW I HAVE NO STRENGTH IN US!
YOU KNOW WHAT I CALL LOVE YOU CALL LUST!
WITH BROKEN FRAMES I'LL CHECK MY VISION AGAIN!
IT MUST BE DISTORTED CAUSE I ONLY SEE YOU AS A FRIEND!

With one kiss,
You know I'll miss you.
Lie on the couch,
Don't awaken.
I'm going to leave so you won't be shaken.
This was coming anyway.
Maybe we'll be back someday!

It's a lie I'm chasing as if it was true.
The truth is I will never see you.
I'm going to leave forever,
Better than ever..
No more lies
and me being a creature without a spine!

YOU KNOW I HAVE NO STRENGTH IN US!
YOU KNOW WHAT I CALL LOVE YOU CALL LUST!
WITH BROKEN FRAMES I'LL CHECK MY VISION AGAIN!
IT MUST BE DISTORTED CAUSE' I ONLY SEE YOU AS A FRIEND!

In the dark we wander on.
It's so familiar I guess we've been here after all
We're used to the parading silence,
And the things that can't be seen for miles.
It's just a sense of you and me.
Someone loved and one that is unbelieved.

Running for years I've found no answer.
I thought maybe I had seen you last year.
But that was just another shadow.
Making illusions out of memories I know.

In the dark I tread on.
I will use the moonlight as my lawn.
But now I'm gone.

Reviews

[Ella]

Alright a: I love these line
"With one kiss,
You know I'll miss you.
Lie on the couch,
Don't awaken."
I don't know why, but I found it very beautiful.

B: Is this a song? If so I wish I could hear it to music, I think it would be amazing. It makes it more interesting thinking it could be a song because it could easily go two ways, a slow touching way or one out of rage.
Love it"

[TheLastEclipse]

Well see my music, and most poems I write usually turn into songs. This is perhaps one of my most thoughtful one, and I mean that as I WANT to turn it into a song. See the caps lock areas were intended for a brink of emotion. I do that a lot in my poetry. And being an ambient-punk-metal-rock-emotional 'mutt' mix of genres, it would be an intense song!

[Ella]

It would be an amazing song! This could easily be turned into a hard rock song, so something you'd head bang too xD I get that though, I envy your ability to write songs :P

[TheLastEclipse]

You shouldn't. You could probably do the same :)

[Ella]

Oh no, not possible, me and poems and emotions do not mix xD (actually a proven fact today :3)

[TheLastEclipse]

I've read one of your poems. They aren't bad :)

[Ella]

They aren't good either ;)