Confinement

This isn't my best writing, alas my friends it is a quick write. I'm warming up for something amazing.

Confinement

 

I'll tear down these walls all by myself.

I am so sick and tired, being confined as hell!

This is disgusting just like your sick smile.

I guess we'll be stuck here for a little while.

 

In the dark I can hear the voices calling, begging me to crack.

They continue laughing at all the sickness, they know what I lack!

And I feel the skin trying to fold over mine!

I will not let him win this time!

Get your evil hands off of mine!

I will never let you leave alive!

 

I'll just jump around crushing every one of the four walls.

Catch my breath before I give it all!

I will either catch your tongue or I will pathetically fall,

For only you can see the air I let out!

I will exhale as I fall to my face once again!

You never were, as you said, my friend!

 

Still existing, are you?

That’s a problem I will just have to take care of.

I will try my best to get off you,

Just in time to play my role.

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

great detail, really well written :)

[Kelsey]

Full of emotion and wonderfully written, I really enjoyed this.

[AleyshaRosa]

This is disgusting just like your sick smile.
I guess we'll be stuck here for a little while.

Loved these two verses. Caught me by the throat and was very visual. I can feel the embers of this poem glowing, bring it on!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Amazing write. I loved the power in this. I loved every emotion within this piece. Great job my dear. Thank you for sharing.

[Ella]

Love it! This isn't good, you say?
You LIE, I say :3 Amazing Darling! :) I like it

[TheLastEclipse]

It is not bad but is not great :P but thank you for your opinion ;D

[Ella]

It is great! :D