Help! Numero Dos

Another help question. This isn't a story, just something I need some opinions on.

 So, this will only make sense if you've read my story Emerald. Someone commented on there that it seemed like a story that could be made into more parts. So I was thinking that maybe I could take that concept and those characters and turn it into a book. It would be more than just the "forbidden love" thing, though. I want it to be like a battle for the Inbetweeners to have a better life or something. Like Nyx and Ander get other people to help them, and try to go against the Inside and show who they really are. To get justice for the Inbetween, y'know. What do you guys think?

Author's Note

Please, please give me some feedback if you take the time to read this. And suggestions for more depth, too. I would appreciate it a lot.

Reviews

[Anonymous Girl]

I agree with everyone who reviewed and suggested that it would be great idea to turn the story into a book. And make the last part of Emerald where the couple die into a nightmare of Nyx; hope you like the suggestion.
By the way do write a book. Everyone will love it :)

[Pugsly]

Emerald should definitely be a book.

[Summer D.]

It sounds like a great idea Lydia! It does have potential for a bigger story. The whole idea of the Outside, Inbetween, etc could be social commentary disguised as a work of fiction... truthfully. Depending on where you're located though....

Go for it.