Beaten and Broken

Is it worth getting up for

Because my strength is all gone

Will it be all that I hoped for

Or will I have to wait too long

I've been beaten and I've been broken

And I can't take much more

Is it a long, dark way I'll have to walk

Or will it be a stroll by the shore

My legs buckle underneath me

I can't make it, I can't

Please guide me, please take me

Before I break down in the sand

Drag me if you have to

Nothing can hurt much more than this

Just promise not to leave me

This is something I cannot miss

It's far more important than you think

It really, really is

Just drop me off by the brink

And then you can fade into the mist.

 

Reviews

[that-little-green-monst..]

I like the last line, it was a strong ending. Beautifully written as is all your work! Great job!

[bunmal]

I loved it! It was more of a dark poem, too. It could have flowed better, though; it felt as if some of the lines were very inconsistent..

[I'm Just me:)]

i have met good writers befor but you are amazing i love your writing its beautiful yet very emotional its like i can feel the words your saying in a flow of amazing poems !!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!