Our Dance

The dance of an enchanted heart
Sways slowly underneath the sparkling stars
Graceful movements, and whispering voices sharing secrets in the dark
A comely, and becoming routine that will surely leave a mark

 

Spinning round and round as my raven hair brushes my face
You turned a demure girl into one bubbling over with ebbulience in this alluring place
The eloquence of our steps barely make a noise, the only sound I hear is the rustling of my lace
The dewy grass between my toes as the sun and moon fight for their spots in a race

 

Our dark shadow prance across the distanced bungalow
As the darkness is replaced with the fresh morning glow
Our feet do not tire as the music continues to flow
If you have grown weary it definitley hasn't shown

 

So, as the sky grows ever more light
We'll reluctantly cease our dancing that is such a beautiful sight
We will go our seperate ways, and tread back into the world so bright
Don't miss me too much, we'll continue our dance tonight

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lunny]

It really is beautiful and kind of surreal atmosphere. love it ^^

[Jasmine Thousand]

This is beautiful, haunting, and the descriptions were amazing. It's one of my favorites. And I love the photo too.

~*Jasmine Thousand~*

[words a la carte]

Very haunting and beautiful. This poem really resonated. I love your descriptive style it really paints a good picture in the reader's head. Please, keep it up. Your work is always a pleasure to read.

[Kes]

If only!
This is a wonderful poem; the imagery is fantastic throughout. The flow is really good too - so easy to read.
Great work; keep it up!
K