Cosmic

You carry the weight 

of the world,

still every day,

you wake.

You spend your time

trying to change

the fate's design,

even if you don't mean to.

I watch, sometimes, and

when the sun shines right,

I see the universe

in your eyes.

I could count the stars

if you'd let me close enough.

I wish all of those planets,

all of those wishes

flying through the sky,

could show you

what I see.

Author's Note

sorry it sucks

Reviews

[isus]

another pretty little poem

[t.m.]

Thank you!

[Emily B]

on the contrary, this is the most wonderful piece of poetry that I have had the privilege to read in a while.I hope you shared it with the person who inspired.

[t.m.]

Thank you! I haven't yet had the chance, but maybe someday.

[Jessica]

This is a great poem. It doesn't suck. It can be hard to let people get close.

[t.m.]

Thank you! I agree; it can be very difficult to let people get close. Especially when you're aware that hurt is a mere step in the wrong direction.

[Corset]

this is a really beautiful write in the way that it is wistful.

[t.m.]

Thank you! I'm trying to write more and my inspiration is drifting

[Corset]

I think mine has been sledgehammered to death, but we keep plugging :)

[t.m.]

True that :)

[Corset]

yes indeed :)