In Time

I really don't consider this to be a poem, just something that ran through my mind and I just wrote it down. Maybe a long thought ... Yes, that's seems to make sense to me.

Watch me cry with all that I've got

See me crawl into a liar's arms

Empty and full of nothing but loneliness

My eyes are wide open and all I see is black

My ears have been clear forever and I hear steady ringing

I'll be fine though - time will go by

I will stand on the broken glass

Walk through the acid filled tunnels

Then step up to the world

I'm going to use everything in my past

In the end, I will illuminate strength

Author's Note

Just a random, rather long, thought. Give me your opinion on it.

Reviews

[Awake.&.Unafraid]

Your 'thought' is more poetic than a lot of poetry I've read! I agree that it's raw and maybe unedited but I find that I kind of like it that way. Once again I love the way you phrase things, your imagery is amazing.