his flesh

his flesh is teeming 

with you bearing inner moans

i'm trembling, scathing 

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I have had that green eyed monster on my back...it's so outta character but in some way exhilarating...I wonder do all shapes end up circles or triangles?

[Moon]

Devastation and jealousy, painful emotions that are mostly caused by the ones that we love and hold dear. I enjoyed this write. It is short, but powerful.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you leigh :)

[Moon]

You are very welcome Xavier

[Mockingbird]

preoccupations like this will cause unnecessary despair and high blood pressure rising to your face.

[m.s.early]

you are incredibly on point

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the voyeur wishing himself in the place of the lover who is teeming...

and causing the inner moans...


he moans inside for her.

[Sami Khalil]

The trembling of emotions, the scathing of tongues, the aching of heartaches. All in the love of someone...Bravo....................

[Lydia Shutter]

Powerful poetry! Sounds like one man upset about another being with the woman he loves. Lydi**

[m.s.early]

Thank you. Point on, Lydia :)