incorporeal

She keeps asking. "When did you know?"

As if it were palpable, appreciable, a thing.

How do you assess the ethereal birth of a notion?

I heard a throbbing. I became incorporeal.

There was less in between.

I pronounced the matter. That is all.

The moment was formless, eternal, unbodied.

I never knew. I always knew. I let her know.

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

'i pronounced the matter. that is all.' that's a serious proclamation said with an irrefutable resonance. very assuring. and very sexy.

[m.s.early]

I'm certainly glad you think so ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Always your words leave me pondering. No small feat I tell you :P

[m.s.early]

As always... thank you for reading Vidya :)
(One day the cat will get your tongue)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hasn't so far Xavier so I'm feeling cocky lol.You are welcome :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is an interesting write. Still stinging from its, I hope not, because me thinks you meant assess and not asses, unless there was some hidden meaning behind that.:)

[m.s.early]

I think I'm going to just quit for a while :-(

[Lyn Anderson]

You better not. Just be your usual fussy self.:)

[m.s.early]

Lol. At least you were the first to see it. This one was inevitable. I saw it, and thought it looked funny, but left it. I think I need to be asleep. Lol

[Lyn Anderson]

I am likely not the first to see things, but nearly always the first to point them out. Do you know how goofy I feel when a poem has like, 700 views and I see something? I hate to even mention it at that point.:)

[m.s.early]

Ha! I guess so. I hope they appreciate it as much as I do :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, it makes me wonder, what the reasons would be for not pointing it out. I hate posting my work with mistakes, so I think others would like to know too.