feather float down and settle like young love in hearts united

feather float down and settle like young love in hearts united

softly sway in wafting breeze carrying in happenstance design

there go weighing lids on eyes drooping in lazy lingering

anticipate harmony in each slowing breath for love is e'er benign

there go marrying minds youthful growth no, never ceasing

there to flow they move through sleep and drift abreast in time

even still in one accord slip into resting star shaped dreams

where morrow's lapse within reasoning state rings true in every rhyme

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I felt like the poem was that feather as it floated into levels of beauty unknown to most mortals.

[Rita L. Sev]

Beautiful flow and lovely imagery in this piece that has the feel of a classic, Xavier.

[Claire in VA]

This is lovely--quite lyrical for me.
Happenstance. I love that word.
Enjoyed.

[s y e]

Oh this is perfection. This is poetry, X. I adore this piece, it is so simple but has a twist to it too. I loved the feel of the poem and the wording... all so perfect.

[Lyn Anderson]

Can I tell you this is my favourite piece of yours? Simple, yet complex, a wonderful write.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Xavier, the imagery and the words are soft, romantic, and amazing. Thank you for this beautiful poem. Be blessed!

[Bright Ocean Star]

Xavier, the imagery and the words are soft, romantic, and amazing. Thank you for this beautiful poem. Be blessed!

[Bright Ocean Star]

Xavier, the imagery and the words are soft, romantic, and amazing. Thank you for this beautiful poem. Be blessed!

[LadyAnn68]

Terrific perspective! Great write!