Love, Lust, Lost

Love, Lust, Lost

A Poem by The Protagonist

He's loving but he's not in love
He's stupid but he knows too much
He likes me but that's not enough
He's distant but I feel his touch
He smiles but I see straight through
He says it but I'm not sure it's true
He looks but I'm not sure he sees 
He's here but I know that he'll leave
He lusts but I'm not sure for what
He's on my mind but he's not what I thought 
His lips are sweet but he tastes like sin 
The truth is I'm in love with him

© 2014 The Protagonist


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The Protagonist
Please let me know what you think :)

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I feel this poem is written from the deepest of the heart. I can feel the love. I can feel the pain. How people usually sacrifice almost everything for love. You write it in the right form.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Protagonist

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly
melodious...
tender...
beautiful...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Protagonist

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I really like this poem... so honest and I find myself relating... well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Protagonist

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Chloe_Spence

11 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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Added on July 16, 2014
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The Protagonist

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom



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