Those Thoughts

I try to put these thoughts into words,

but they all come out unheard.

 

I'm affraid to say how I feel,

For I wouldent be able to heal,

 

The pain of the word "No",

It hurts too much to say how so.

 

Asking you to the movies was a mistake,

Because we didn't even get the chance to bake the cake.

 

I wish you would give me the chance,

To prove that I can hold your glance.

 

You say that I don't turn you blue,

But we all know that is untrue.

 

Because people like us,

Have feelings just like you.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just another poem. Ignore any spelling or grammer mistakes. Hope you all enjoy it! :)

Reviews

[Infinite hexes]

yeah the pain of writing, sad, really sadly penned

[lynne]

This is so adorably sad. I say adorable, because you are 15 years old (only a year younger than me) and you write like this, and omg, you are so poetic! It's hard to find boys like this, especially teenage ones, who aren't afraid to write a poem about a girl who turned them down, and put it online. This is such a sad, poetic poem, and you can just feel the emotion in it. I especially like the last two lines. Keep on writing, because your a great poet.

[Edward]

Thank you sooooooo much! :) this means a lot to me!

[lynne]

Well, you deserve it :)

[lynne]

By the way, the girl who turned you down was crazy, because any boy who writes like this, is quite the catch :) I would totally say yes, if I were her.

[Edward]

Thanks! Good to know. But I got a very special one with me! Thanks though ^3^

[Soul Fire]

AWww I'm loving your poetry :D

[The Fallen]

Oh! Amazing write >.< I can feel the emotion built up in this and just wow.. I believe this is an amazing poem that shall be going into my library (: Keep on writing

[Edward]

Thank you!

[The Fallen]

You are quite welcome