Have you

Yea still song of an emotional scene in my life. and may be confusing. But if you get confuse. WELCOME TO THE CLUB.

Have you ever thought about,
the feelings of mine when I doubt.
Have you ever thought lately,
that I can be dead tonight.

Have you ever thought,
of freeing me from Hades grasps.
Have you ever thought,
that I can be Apollo in the darkness of your mind.

You may have been a Dionysus in my arms.
But did I ever give up,
hoping that you'll for the sake of our hearts.
Hail Aphrodite for giving us our hearts.

Author's Note

Originally I like to confuse people. But if you aren't confuse then you might know me instictively, naturally or unintentionally.

Reviews

[Frontier]

Wow, this is very beautiful! I love the line "Have you ever thought,
that I can be Apollo in the darkness of your mind." I really like that your have mythological references.

I'd appreciate if you commented on my writing :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

third line from the bottom, i think your 'gave' is supposed to be 'give'.