My Irony

Yea My version of the WEEK

Irony

Two people.

Been together since they were young.

Once they met, friendship began.

But things never last.

Torn apart by society's revolution/evolution (you pick)

One so far, the other so close.

Monday is so far from Friday, yet Friday is so close to Monday.

Reviews

[New Theory]

Wonderful, perspective and idea that is unique, I loved this equating distance with time with emotion a very clever piece of poetry, I think you should writing short fantasy stories, your mind is already grasping it and is quiet evident in this piece.

[TheSearcher]

Thnk you~ for the review and I might do a short fic.

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)