Dream Within a Dream

You wake to find, life is nothing but a dream within a dream.

O heavy eyelids, 

dream dimed eye's,

dream's fade into a wavering flame. 

Until my cloud felled eyelids wake,

to a dream.  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[C]

This is profoundly innovative. :)

[Amanda]

Thank you very much. :-)

[Diana]

I liked it. People always have talked about how what if life was just a dream, but I've never seen it in writing. It's interesting how things don't have to rhyme, but they still sounds great even without it.

[Amanda]

I was taught poetry doesn't always have to rhyme. :-) Thank you for your comment, I am glad you like it.