You left

Where’d you go?
I’ve waited so
Long to see your face.
Where’s this place
That you’re at?
Many days I’ve sat
And waited.
I haven’t dated
Since you left me.
Can’t you see?

Me heart and I
Cry and cry
Till you say,
“This is the day
You’ll never forget
Or regret
I came back.”

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

So sad and passionate. I feel the heart cry out so. So emotional. :)

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Emotional and full of heartbroken longing. I thought the middle of the poem seemed a little forced and less poetic, but the beginning and end were strong.

[Alskar]

The longing is so plain to see in this poem, really really nice. Something I can even relate to myself.

[Terra]

i mean strong emotion.i like it a lot.

[Terra]

tion.i like it a lot.

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Thank you =D

[HopelesslyDevoted]

great poem, you are very talented with words for sure ;)