My struggle to have you

I lie here,
curled up under my sheets,
longing to feel your touch
move all over my quivering body.
You drive me crazy.
Screaming out your name
I trick myself that somehow you are able to hear.
I want you here
at my side.
giving me the strength
to fight my disease
that has swallowed my soul
and left it dry.
I need to hear your voice
ring in my ear
to get rid of the voices
that have been calling out to me.
I need you to make me feel
what everyone should be able to feel...
alive.

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Very romantic!!!!!! Great write.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

hm.. interesting

[soulsearching]

Perfect..

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awww i can feel the love through this

[State of Grace]

This is such a great poem, I absolutely love it! Whoever this is for is so lucky to have known someone who cared this much for them. Awesome poem! :)

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

@Lizzard
Thank you very much, I just wish that person would read what I write and start remembering my existance, but thank you very much =D

[~Lizzy♬]

I really love the beauty through this poem. Whoever you wrote it for should be very in love with it. :) Great write!

~Lizzard~

[Emily B]

wonderful

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

You have a flair for writing descriptive love poems. The two reviewers before me have pretty much said it all, so I'll leave it at that. I enjoyed reading this!

[Kathryn]

'swallowed my soul/and left it dry.' I can think of no better way to describe the effects of a self-induced ilness of the mind. Brilliant imagery, and the final word, 'alive', gives it a finallity that I truly admire. Well done, i truly do love your poetry.