Drowning

The bell tolls
Ringing in the silence
Of my lonliness
Emptiness is full
Of past pain
Overflowing
And dripping into daily life
Flooding who I am
Drowning all chance
Of love, of joy
I wish I knew how to swim!

Show me how...

Reviews

[Rediscovery]

This was a great read. I love the image of love and joy being flooded and overcome by pain and lonliness. Great job!

[DearSweetAgony]

I had to read this twice also.
Very good,I enjoyed reading this.
Great Job!

[A.E. Surdam]

Beautiful. I had to re-read it twice.

[Kathryn]

wow. any more words would not do this justice, so just wow.

[State of Grace]

"Flooding who I am drowning all chance of love, of joy" Absolutely beautiful lines! :)