Why do I even try

Why do I even try

A Poem by Brandon Bretsnyder

Why do I even try
When all I want to do is cry
With each step that I take
I continually feel as if I’m going to break
I don’t want to live here anymore
This world has taken everything that I adore
Why does this always happen to me
Why can’t anybody see
The pain I feel is unbearable
Pain most people couldn’t even handle
I’m sick of everybody trying to pull me down
I’m sick of everybody trying to make me frown
Why do I even try
When all I want to do is die

© 2015 Brandon Bretsnyder


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A powerful poem that described struggle and disappointment. Easy to be pissed-off and know anger. Sometime us the disappointment to show the world. You are worth a lot. A very good poem. You left the reader with something to think about.
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Added on May 19, 2015
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Brandon Bretsnyder
Brandon Bretsnyder

Newland, NC



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Well, I'm a 15 year old living with my Father. I've had some depression in my past and I take control of it by writing poems. Most of my poems will be depressing. So, if you're looking for something h.. more..