Life is hard

I tried something new l. Hope you like it.

Trying
Always trying
Seems like it's never
Never enough
Enough to just
Just talk to you
You want more
More than I can give
Give away my heart
Heart that's been
Been stamped on
On the ground
Ground that's cold
Cold like your heart
Heart that said
Said it cared
Cared about me
Me feeling like a constant fool

Author's Note

I tried something new. Because this is how I've been feeling, but I'm finding something new

Reviews

[Lorne Blaine]

I see what you did there, that's a cool style. Like that previous comment, I would have liked to see more of it and, maybe, you should have kept a fast pace through the entire poem- I felt like the pace was dragging at some part, but that's subjective. I liked it.

[Jessica]

A different style. The ninja is my drawing

[t.m.]

Style of writing, or drawing or living or what? And I like it. It's nifty.

[Jessica]

Style of writing. And I'm trying to get life put together

[t.m.]

Oh. Well it's interesting. I'm tempted to ask for an elaboration on your work. And getting life put together is a hell of a task isn't it?

[Jessica]

It definitely is. I don't know if I can do it lol

[t.m.]

Inbox back and explain.

[t.m.]

1. Your drawing?

2. What new thing are you finding?