Monsters.

How hopeless is a Girl who cries? 
 When what We Say creates those lines.
  Her eyes rimmed red And darkly smudged. 
   Those lines we've left, A bloody grudge. 
    Deserve it? No. How could she?
      We've labeled her a false beauty.
      She's nothing more then a worthless w***e. 
         To hide the Monsters, that We are.

         
 
 
 
  

Reviews

[kayla]

Wow. This is great. I love this.

[Jordan Easley]

Very nice. I like the hidden message underneath and the concept of "who the real monster is" that lies under the whole piece. Very interesting choice of a vocabulary. The only criticism I have is to make it longer and add more detail. However, not too much. Its always nice to leave a little to the reader's imagination :)