Worse

I saw a quote and added to it. I might add to the poem. I'm not sure.

It stings in the shower
And the worse part is
You know
Exactly
What I'm talking about

Isn't that pathetic?
I go to a knife
For help
And all
It does
Is make
It worse

Author's Note

Anything else I should add? This is my first poem I wrote.

Reviews

[honey]

Definitely good as a first working.

[Coyote Poetry]

You wrote enough. Create vision and you left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. Wood ?]

I do NOT know what you are talking about and I don't need to just as this poem needs no extra work. Different and definitely interesting...not too bad for a first

[B. M. Cooby]

Powerful writing in a few words. Awesome work! Hope everything is well with you and your people.