Endless Dreams

My first attempt at writing a poem that does not ryhme.

I live in a world of endless dreams

Surviving solely on hope and possibilities

Certain that my moment will come

The moment where I know it is my time to succeed

But when I step outside my world

My hopes and dreams struggle to exist

It's a scary place

A place that strips away a persons passion

A constant battle of ones emotions

It's a place I hate to go

But a place I can not deny

It's forever there waiting for my return

My hopes and dreams my only savior

And in a single moment where I feel doubt

My saviors are gone and I am back

Sucked into a world of indifference

Taken over by fear and uncertainty

It's an uphill battle to return to my world

But everytime I will fight

For I refuse to go down a failure

My moment will come

And I will succeed

Reviews

[Inactive]

This is an excellent poem, it communicates very well the fear of realizing ones dreams. Which is a fear we all have experienced, or will experience, at some point in our lives.

Great work.

- Neo

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

I love it to keep up the great work...x0

[Aube Ralph]

i LOVE it!!! Keep 'em coming!!!

[Jackson Yang]

Very well written poem. The beginning draws you in right from the start and the end gives it that perfect ending. Well maybe not perfect since nothing can be perfect but I think you know what Im saying haha. Hope helps you carry on in life even as others may try to bring you down. A very inspiring poem.