Love so True

There are moments where I can not stand to be around you

The sound of your voice makes me want to scream

The look on your face makes me want to run

It's just sometimes I really can not stand you

 

Then there are moments where I want nothing more to do

Then be in your arms while I dream

Know that you will be there when all is said and done

Standing at my side during troubled times of new

 

And even though there are times where I feel I hate you

I can not deny my heart in knowing we are a team

There are times of tears, but amongst them more times of fun

So in then end I know that one part me plus one part you equals a love so true

 

Reviews

[JustWantLove]

An absolute and directly-fundamental confession of balance to each soul; the need and desire for an individualistic approach to own universal endeavors is met perfectly with the presence of the soul that is joined with us in the constant push-pull pendulum of life. Again, a splendid method in the depiction of balance, freedom and love. Ironic, if you'd deeply ponder over it; freedom and love. Which one to choose? Yet they are so closely entwined and joined.

Yet the ultimate struggle is to find that medium where the two worlds become one. That, in my books ... is heaven! Pursue it or die trying!

A marvelous piece to the feeling heart and a philosophical mind! Bravo!!!

[*Evelen*]

Cute poem. All of it is so true. Good job! Thanks for sharing.