Sea

Heaven is only a thought away.

The sound

Clash, Swhoosh, Whoosh

Hitting sand and rocks

The birds they call

To mates upon the rocks

The air smell of salt and earth

The skies painted a soft smiling blue

I am at peace

In this place I have no fears

No worries or pains live here

Here I am free to spread my wings and fly

Reviews

[Costa Siwale]

serenity, well expressed, the feeling of the sea
is the essence of freedom in its vastness.
Wonderfully written my friend. Well done

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you for your review.

[Ty]

Complacent and cascading waves. Love it.

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you. :)

[Ruth]

The sea has always called to me, you describe the beauty of its vast wonder potently here :) Something about the sea that cures all ills and transcends :)

[T.S. Sky]

I thank you for your review. I am happy you like it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am by the sea on holiday and this one resonates. Nice images captures answer calmness that can come from such nature. Not sure about using 'rocks' twice?

[T.S. Sky]

I thank you for your review. :)

[Bala Gorthi]

The sea has that power to bring heaven very near. Thank you for bringing this fact through your cute write. It took me to the sea.

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you for liking my poem and writing a review. :)

[wordman]

a beautiful thought ,i can close my eyes and feel it

[T.S. Sky]

I am glad my poem can take you to a place of peace. Thank you.

[wordman]

my pleasure