Dance So Free

One day 

I'm going to dance so free

among the tombstones

One day 

I'm going to dance so free

My face in the clouds

One day

I'm going to dance so free

My spirit no longer caged

One day

I'm going to dance so free

I tire of this old body

One day

I'm going to dance so free

No on will tell me no

One day

I'm going to dance so free

All the way home

Reviews

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you all. Light n love.

[Costa Siwale]

"One day
I'm going to dance so free
among the tombstones"

Powerful openings in this piece, I always
love the repetition for emphasis.

one day, may you dance with the
desires of your heart.
well done

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you.

[Ruth]

And that "one day" is closer than many think :) Maintain the faith and dream. I particularly like the imagery of dancing among the tombstones. A conviction and strength show in this :)

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you.

[wordman]

one day may you dance on the pillars of your mind

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you.

[wordman]

my pleasure