Sad Girl

I was thinking of the Slyvia Plath movie.

Sad Girl
Why do you cry?

Who broke your soul?
Who took your happiness?
Who spit on your peace?

Sad Girl
Why do you cry?

Am I the reason?
Is he?
Is she?
Is they?

How deep is your song?
The wails are long in the night
You hurt so bitterly
Rivers spring from your eyes

Sad Girl
Why do you cry?

Why do you sing songs so sweetly 
So longingly melancholy

The light dims as you walk by 
It flickers slightly
No one notices
You notice
I see you looking at me
With piercing brown eyes 
You see 
I notice too

By: Theresa Sky
11/19/2017

Reviews

[Ruth]

Whether self reflection or external reflection, light is noticed eventually whether it is dimmer than usual or shines brighter than expected, this is beautiful hon...

[Costa Siwale]

I like the looming melancholy, the subtle-ness of a broken being.

I see you looking at me
With piercing brown eyes 
You see 
I notice too.

Definitely the best lines.

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you. :)

[Costa Siwale]

of course Sky, any time

[wordman]

a walk through life,as we deem it to be

[T.S. Sky]

Indeed it is true.

[Weeping willow]

Sadness have a way of changing our faces till we see only gloom,may you see light along the dark side as well;-] nice emotions.

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you.