The Cut

The Cut

A Poem by DIVYA
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The horrors of female circumcision

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In a gynae ward of muffled cries
"Sukuma, sukuma," the nurses urge
They groan under African skies
Pains in turgid bellies surge

A sufferer lies there, limp and drained
Torment in waves, her womb to seize
Her passage by thick scars, constrained
Life trapped in her, asking release

She bears the brutal cuts of the past
Rituals rooted in sick beliefs
A scythe in her infancy, cast
Cruel its cut, though swift and brief

She pushes and pushes to no avail
Between her and her child they loom
Forefathers, all distinctly male
Their shadows filling up the stark room

A glinting cleaver comes to life
For they know a knife alone can fix
That which has been marred by a knife
When flesh turns into a wall of bricks

Slashing the wounds of yesterday
The blade carves out in her a door
Out comes life in a bloodied spray
The baby crowns in raw filth and gore

She slips into a stupor very dark
Stitched up with the coarsest of threads
Rewarded for her pain with more marks
She lies unseen in her childbed



*Sukuma: ‘Push’ in Kiswahili, an East African dialect.

© 2024 DIVYA


Author's Note

DIVYA
“When it happened to me, I was held down by my own mum.” - A Kenyan leader.

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Your poem powerfully exposes how a woman's suffering in childbirth is inseparable from the violence done to her body in the name of traditiion, showing how female circumcision turns the act of giving life into a scene of trauma shaped by patriarchy and inherited cruelty; by returning to the knife as both the cause of harm and the desperate means of survival, you reveal the tragic cycle in which male-made rituals scar women physically and spiritually, while their pain remains unseen even at the moment of birth, making the poem not just a narrative of one woman's ordeal but a fierce indictment of belief systems that normalize suffering and erase the voice of women.

Powerful.

I am truly happy to see you and to read you again, Divya!
I come back here every now and then and I always miss those golden days with friends and fellow travelers like you!

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Days Ago

Dear Belle,
Thank you so much for appreciating poem! I had seen such a childbirth and the utt.. read more



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oh Divya ... your poem is so raw and powerful ... a loud, strong voice for those who suffered and still suffer that horrible, cultural brutality .. well done .. it's and issue not often brought to my mind and reading your poem enlightens my prayers right now .. blessing Divya ... luv and hugs
E.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Days Ago

Dear E,

My heartfelt thanks for feeling this poem! Your thoughts so appreciated!
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DIVYA

2 Days Ago

My responses are getting truncated here. Missed you, my dear friend. Sending you much love on New Ye.. read more
Your poem powerfully exposes how a woman's suffering in childbirth is inseparable from the violence done to her body in the name of traditiion, showing how female circumcision turns the act of giving life into a scene of trauma shaped by patriarchy and inherited cruelty; by returning to the knife as both the cause of harm and the desperate means of survival, you reveal the tragic cycle in which male-made rituals scar women physically and spiritually, while their pain remains unseen even at the moment of birth, making the poem not just a narrative of one woman's ordeal but a fierce indictment of belief systems that normalize suffering and erase the voice of women.

Powerful.

I am truly happy to see you and to read you again, Divya!
I come back here every now and then and I always miss those golden days with friends and fellow travelers like you!

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Days Ago

Dear Belle,
Thank you so much for appreciating poem! I had seen such a childbirth and the utt.. read more
A brutal ritual captured with honesty and realism. Some customs adopted by certain peoples still belong in the dark ages but remain in practice still today.

A difficult subject matter skilfully conveyed here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Year Ago

Yes, very difficult indeed. There's so much beyond belief in this world. Never ceases to shock me. T.. read more

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Added on November 19, 2024
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After years and years of all said and done, I'm still here to post my scribbles. It was all that really mattered, then and now. ✍️ ~DIVYA more..