In A Cup

In the sharing

of a steaming cup 

Dew drops spring

on thawing skin

Your hot chocolate breath 

Fogs my judgement

and I let the heat course

through miles and miles

of a long frozen me

Watching us, the winter fumes

Forgetting to shiver.

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Reviews

[Marina]

Beautiful poem, Ayvid. The kind of poem ‘Milo Man’ would enjoy with his own hot chocolate breath! Just like that steaming hot cup, the right words spoken to a lover can reignite the fire that has perhaps become just burning embers. Passion revived that even the seasons are enthralled by.

A lovely idea, well expressed. ❤️

[JustJulie]

Hot and pulse racing. Amazing stuff that I can feel and and feel away.

[DIVYA]

Thank you so much JustJulie.

[Neville]

This is quite simply one of those rare almost out of this world amazing poems that I wish I had got to first .. and I don't mean just to visit .. Bravo my friend .. and subsequently awarded my dubble 👍👍Neville

[DIVYA]

Thank you very much, my friend. Your review made my day. The winter smog lifts.

[Neville]

that's another win win then .. and you are most welcome