Let them fight it out first??

Let them fight it out first??

A Poem by DIVYA
"

He said....

"

We must fight it out first- 

to be true friends, or informed allies 

We must fight it out first.- 

to test each other's arsenal-

all the weapons, we brandish-

also those we conceal.

 

We must fight it out first-

for we need to know how deeply 

we can hurt each other

how we can kill each other-

Irreversibly, irrevocably. 

 

Because the battleground

is not unlike the bedroom -

raw, exposed,

intimate in the bloodiest of ways.

Where we lock limbs

in a bid to trump each other-

where we undress, 

our very deepest parts 

our darkest fears.

 

We must fight it out first-

before we chose to embrace 

or destroy each other completely.

We need to be at war 

We must go to war

before we can know peace-

taste the bitter-sweet fruits

of brotherhood.

 

© 2025 DIVYA


Author's Note

DIVYA
A great man said - "Let them fight it out first." :)

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Wow!

Hi Betty...this is a deeply sensitised poem expressing anger and opening to the fact that as humans we can "go to war" with each other sometimes.......

Thanks for sharing...

BB73

Posted 6 Months Ago


DIVYA

6 Months Ago

The name is DIVYA and not Betty. But thank you.
Dear Divya
I have to believe you are right... they must show might (sadly) and try to decimate until they realize that it can't go on forever...they must negotiate to end conflict....
With sorrow,
B

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty Hermelee

6 Months Ago

He is not the greatest leader as you know...so we never know what he is is up to!!!
sending h.. read more
DIVYA

6 Months Ago

Many hugs back to you, dear Betty!
Wishes for a wonderful day! 💐💞💐💞
Betty Hermelee

6 Months Ago

Excited about the wedding and grandson home! Spoke to him today, he sounds good, glad to out of harm.. read more
Yeah and then, you've got nuffin of the sort to think about later.
Cuz that's how sometimes the people work... Cheers

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

6 Months Ago

You're doing just fine without news. There's a lot of nonsense being said out there. This poem is a .. read more
Dennis Wolf

6 Months Ago

Well, that in itself isn't new 🤔 I'm sort of waiting for someone to tell me that these people sai.. read more
DIVYA

6 Months Ago

😹
Hardly ever but this one was really funny.

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Added on June 16, 2025
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After years and years of all said and done, I'm still here to post my scribbles. It was all that really mattered, then and now. ✍️ ~DIVYA more..