The Examination

This is what AI reviews feel like...

My spreadeagled poem screams.

The AI’s hands are too clinical, too cold- probing places meant for sacred dialogue. It pulls and tugs at her polyps, pinches folds of soft words still warm from birthing pain. The poem recoils, begs for release, writhing in agony on the cold, algorithmic bed. Take away the speculum, she pleads, switch off the bright lights. Cover me with warmth. It was a mistake- she should have stayed in the void: unfelt, unread, not fed to a machine that stripped her bare, scanning her grammar, syntax, and mood while she burned with shame. ~~~~~

Author's Note

AI is a bad gynaecologist .....

Reviews

[Dennis Wolf]

Ai has mind bending potential and implications for science and like any tool, we should use it... However, the arts 😅 well, let's say it is bad enough with only people, because we try to communicate the essence of subjective experiences that were filtered through our own lenses of perception, we can easily enough put across the filtered result, however, the experience itself is always impossible to communicate, irrespective of how well and how much of a roundabout way you go about it. In addition to that, what others experience when viewing someone else's work is another experience altogether... So, knowing this, we try to create something that will hopefully be experienced in a similar way to what we had experienced... But, now, we come to Ai.

Ai does not experience in the usual sense, it's just a set of group think processes that looks at, compares information, juxtaposes this and that, calculates probabilities etc... It's not capable of the experience, it can mimic reactions akin to that of a sentient being, use specific word choices, examine specific techniques and compare those, as if they were an objective standard (but they are not) to whatever you give to it to examine.


It's an unfeeling machine, not truly "intelligent" because it learns patterns and such but lacks the capacity for subjective experience, so it's not really conscious 🤔
That said, you can use it, as a tool, as long as you know what you want to use it for, what parts of its suggestions are irrelevant
.. But always mindfully.

Awesome write here.

[DIVYA]

Thanks a lot Dennis. From what you described of AI, it should be the last thing to be used to analyse something as unique and sensitive as poetry. Use it mindfully you said and I agree, as a thesaurus, for phrases and punctuation. Occasionally, for suggesting rhyming.
AI is not intelligent. So true. As a regular user, I sometimes marvel at it's stupidity. It's a cadaver mimicking a live human. Ugh. Thanks again. 😊🥂

[Dennis Wolf]

No need for thanks. 😁It's just the tooth as I see it 🤣

[DIVYA]

....😹....
You see it only too well.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

The poem speaks. "If you can't give me a human response, please leave my page!"

[DIVYA]

Thank you for understanding, my friend.

[Ms claws]

Hello DIVYA , I think all females feel this at some point.
However, we must follow protocol to assure our health, correct?
I feel for you. https://youtu.be/YW0sxgYAmLM?si=u-4Rk5w5aCva-363

[DIVYA]

Yes, of course. Some things must be borne with gritted teeth. I guess. Thank you for understanding and that lovely link shared. I'm closing my account and zooming off into the unknown. Writerscafe.org has kind of failed me - the lost bf did not return. "See you in Connecticut some day" (A line from Nevil Shute's novel 'On The Beach')
❤️

[Ms claws]

I'm so sorry ...You are a great Poet

[Arundass TP]

It's AI. Cannot ignore. Just accept, the only way to survive. Good poem

[DIVYA]

Thank you my friend.