Now I Lay Me Down.

Bleh.

Now I lay me down to sleep,

I pray you choke to death.

Let eagles steal your beating heart,

let children take your breath.

If I should die before I wake,

I pray they find your soul.

And blacken it with broken words,

I pray you never whole.

Reviews

[ssstikdownn]

Love it, and it explains how I feel about an ex at the moment...beautifully written

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Keep it up!!

[Dilan Gunawardana]

I can really taste the bitterness in this piece, I love the line "let eagles steal your beating heart" :D

[L.E.Osborne]

Thank you :)

[Matching Socks]

May your prayers be answered... :)

[L.E.Osborne]

Ha ha thanks :)

[Matching Socks]

Anytime! I know the feeling. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A good rant and rave. Bravo......................

[L.E.Osborne]

Thank you.............. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................