Surfer of The Concrete

Im not much of poet, more of story-teller but do enjoy writing one out of pleasure every so often.

A surfer of concrete jungles,

Dodging the dieses of day-to-day distraction.

Intertwining interwoven pathways through green, yellow, and red,

As the wheels walk on, 

The streets feel the pleasure as the wood cries under the whining melody

Of excitement and thrill,

For only the rider can control.

Author's Note

Do appreciate constructive criticism!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'Intertwining interwoven pathways .. ' sweet sounding words!

Tis a wonderful run of phrases; they create pictures in a most elegant form. You'll be a welcome addition to the Cafe, Thomas.

[Alejandra Marie]

Very nice. Great message. And nicely written. Great job.

[Valentine]

a very good job. You did very well on this one. Valentine

[Frieda P]

Skateboarding through life's winding turns, sounds rather exhilarating and dangerous if you lose your balance. Nicely pen'd.

[Sami Khalil]

In the concrete jungle, it can be harsh and cold. People have no time for others too. Bravo...............