Be Independent

A short poem about individuality, creativity and the need to stand out.

Strike your own spark

and set this world on fire

You can be unique

and the need, it's dire

There's not enough room

for another carbon copy,

with generic likes

and worn out hobbies 

Make yourself 

from a different mold 

Go read books,

learn to be bold 

A simple question

is to be asked

Do you want to die

like them

or ensure you last...

In the museums

of our collective mind?

Finding fame

through contributions

so sublime 

If the latter is

what you want,

then get straight to it,

don't prolong 

Reviews

[Brent]

Your poem is a call-to-action for people who have yet to follow their dreams. The world is built on innovation. Things are constantly changing and we have more ability now than ever to impact the whole world. Hopefully people are motivated by your message.

Great piece on the need for independent thinkers!

[Thomas Emile Vaughen]

Hi there Brent. Thanks very much for the review mate - it was very kind. I look forward to reading some of your work and hope to repay the favour soon.