Forever Gone

This was inspired, at first, by the death of my rabbit. R.I.P, little bunny.

Maybe if I’d been observant,

Maybe if I’d seen…

 

That the problems that were troubling you were more than they had seemed.

 

Then perhaps this could have been resolved,

This cruel affliction cured.

Perhaps you would have seen the day

And I’d have kept my word.

 

But now you lie as limp as rags,

 

Beneath the rain soaked ground.

Your eyes blank and glassy,

And your soul heaven bound.

 

Never will you see the light,

 

Only darkness do you taste.

Just another carcass in the mud,

Another life at waste.

Reviews

[MoonlitAngel]

Wow. And this was about a little bunny? Wow. This actually made me cry a little. And like... I'll cry over really emtional stories and stuff, but a POEM?!? Wow. You have got some EXTREME talent. You made me cry. Well.. I'm sure most of it was because I was imagining a little bunny while I was reading it, but hey... You still made me cry off a poem. You got tallllent! Keep writing!!!

--Blood

[Scarlet Pulse]

WOW!!! That was intense. It was a great read. I love bunnies, and Im sorry yours passed away! :o(

[Mr.Delian Ripley]

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Masterful work.