Say Something “Remix”

Say something, I’m waiting for you.

Just to fall asleep, dreaming of what to do.

Wake up, to still be standing right here, next to what you drew,

That painting is so clear, it’s better than brand new

All I can picture, is a way to find proof, You have skills, you just need to see things through

Say something, I don’t know what to do.

Running from global news, to end up shooting you!

Thieves run, but I knew, it was was time, books were due,

You can only study so long, until the spine is screwed,

Return what’s borrowed, before I’m forced to choose.

Say something, I don’t know what to do.

Fears draw me back, to the goon,

Why can’t I escape, this impending doom.

Wishing for, a way to disappear, from the truth,

Graze with god, as we sip a brew.

Wondering how, to get past this, very soon!

Say something I am lost, to staring at the moon.

Where do I turn, to see where I grew?

Memory’s fade, as the picture is glued.

I can’t remember, my first time I flew.

Hoping to see, someone I once knew,

Now I want to share, this moment with you!

So say something… I don’t know what to do…

Author's Note

Wrote of a friend, and based it on a song. “Say Something”

Reviews

[ThreeWrites]

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I think you quoted me, that passed right over my head. I didn’t remember this poem, but I guess it’s an alright story. At the end of the day you’re still right.

[ETERNITY]

It's you. Seeing the painting so clear. Nobody sees things like you do.
Stop trying to escape. It's not impending doom. It's "you" and you are beautiful.
This write proves it. There is nobody that can equal you.
Give the world what you are. You are the beauty we all try to reach.