God's Gift

Our Heart,
Our Body,
Our Mind,
The Father,
The Son,
The Spirit inside.
Created in His image,
So holy and bright,
Giving us Himself,
Eternally right.

Father forgive me for I have sinned,
We wronged our Father,
Our innocence skinned,
Why did He bother?

For His children He loves,
With all of His might,
He gave us His Son,
Our small ray of light,

This only Son sacrificed for us,
His life taken relieving our sins,
Dying for our souls,
Our new life begins.

One so almighty,
Giving us love,
Sending us Jesus,
From heaven above.

How can we repay Him?
For this gift so great,
Most just ignore,
His loving embrace.
Show Him our love,
How grateful and fair,
Live through His son,
Show Him you care.

 
 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

very devout and spiritual piece. excellent job.

[Sunshadow Coyote]

rich and creative...your work portrays perfectly the wonder of spiritualism..i enjoyed it to the end and made the read well worth it. It seems you have paid Him back in full on this one.

[I'llXloveXherXforever]

Did you really write that man? Thats one of the greatest pieces I've ever seen. It rhymes and it makes a lot of sense. Good job brother.

[Crifa]

Yeah this is my second most recent one. Thanks man it means a lot

[I'llXloveXherXforever]

well its really good you must have been doing this for a while

[Crifa]

Yeah..I have a ton of writing but I only really write one nowadays if I have raw inspiration

[Odayin]

This is a great religious telling. I truly felt more connected to God throughout the reading as I came to the realization that I could actually relate, understand, and nod my head to each one of your words.
Truly inspirational, you had great form and i loved how you stuck to the rhyme scheme. Keep it up, don't let your gift die