First Sip, Last Drink

a short of 2am thoughts.

You left me a hangover
That I've been curing for years
And got me pretending
I've been sober all those times

When in fact the very first
Dose of you got me very drunk.
I could never deny this,
"I've been thirsty since day one."

Author's Note

Hi, this won't take much of your time to read. Let me know what you think. Thank you!

Reviews

[Karen Arizona]

Good poem, Dan. I understand your words 100%. Your poem is short but, yet, it says it all. Thank you for sharing.

[Dan_Thywill]

Thank you, Karen. Your review means a lot. Yes, shorts like this are injected thoughts in my mind most of the time. Very raw and unedited. Thanks again! =)