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It’s the end of a phase,

I miss it already.

With bright hopes

For sunnier days,

They apply themselves.

Yet I am all but lost.

With lips bursting praise

I long for earlier times,

When they were near.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

this poem expresses your emotion and works for that reason. you might try this sort of poem without trying to rhyme. See how that works for you. Either way it was a nice poem.

keep writing. :-)

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Short, sweet and satisfying. It allows me to reflect on a more innocent time in my life. When tomorrow was far away and today didn't seem like the echoing chords of doom! LOL! I like this lady!

[Kristin Brecoe]

I agree with antony. it does have an air of mystery about it. nicely done.

[Tony]

This has a mystery to it, I can't put my finger on it and so I am curious.

Antony