Hoar Frost

something I cam up with after the first frost of the year... always something somber and beautiful to me.

There was nothing in her sights

A mercurial reality

Slipping by

 

As shallow as the hoar frost

She melts off the window

With her breath

As she watches the geese fly

Reviews

[Elysia]

I like it. short and simple, stright to the point. I loved that is was something that could be deep and meaningful to you, as well as anybody else. That it could mean so many different things.

[IComeAnon]

I love the picture this paints when I read it. Excellent work.

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I loved the way this flowed, almost mystically into the minds eye. I can totally see the images that you crafted with your words here. A wonderful scene! =)

- Ash

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. wow ... surreal and beautiful ...