Every Touch, Every Kiss, Every Look..

This short poem attempts to represent the feelings you get when with your loved one.

An ember grows in my heart,
     as I gaze at your face.
A warmth crashes over me,
     as I gently caress your face.
My mind fills with wonderful dreams,
     as I get lost deep in your eyes.
And hope fills my heart,
     as your lips slowly meet mine.

Reviews

[1Disawsum]

Wow! I dearly do hope this is what love feels like aha The start was clever and poetic, and definitely flows. "An ember grows in my heart" smart wording! Finely penned, great work.

[G.M]

This is beautiful. So simply elegant and expressive, I loved it!