DISCOVERY

A flash - fiction story I wrote in less than 5 minutes. It's quite...dark but I still hope you enjoy! :)

At first, I wondered why I let people walk all over me and why I couldn't fight and scream that I love you and I miss you.
But that was before I discovered I'd been buried alive...

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It does sometimes feel like being buried alive when you can't just say what you really want to, to a loved one...
Or else the realization of not being able to say it aloud could also bring that feeling of being buried alive...

Dark piece, but... Thought provoking for me. Nicely penned as always, Tina 👍

[matrixmark]

ANOTHER little gem of a find. Made my day to read another Tina twist.

Respect as always.

Mark

[Tina H.W.]

Aw, thank you, Mark. Your kind comments are always appreciated :)

[R J Askew]

Ach, trapped. This could be a description of writers block. A living death, except the person is not dead. Gulp. Made me think.

[Tina H.W.]

Yah...I probably had writers' block at the time... ;)

[Shannon]

The duality of meaning here is extremely powerful!

[freaksheet]

Your short stories are awesome! I don't know how you do them! You should tell them the fortune teller one you told me!

[Tina H.W.]

Thank you, Mikey. Haha maybe I will! I'd completely forgotten about that one!

[freaksheet]

Yay! Do it!

[Inject Positivity]

clappings!!! the last line summed up the whole story... im loving your short stories... they are may be very short but they always have a twist in the tale... very well thought out piece... enjoyable and worth reading...

[Tina H.W.]

Thank you so much! Just the feeling I was trying to stir up :) I'm a huge fan of flash-fiction and twist in the tales. You can't see me, but my smile at your review is very wide. Thank you again! :D

[Inject Positivity]

thought about reading this one again... gosh! i would love to learn from you about how to write such beautiful pieces of writing...

[Tina H.W.]

Oh! Wow! Thank you! But I really don't know where they come from...Maybe I'm just warped. Or something... ;)

[Inject Positivity]

i think every writer has his/her own unique capability and this is yours and i really admire it... i don't know what others say but i really enjoy your works... one can never get bored reading your stories...