Our Love

Beautiful love that was once ours

As we now sore through mars

The red planet bind your betrayal 

Mars' color represents my heart

The fiery color represents our love

Burned...

Reviews

[Mr.Night]

So simple yet, I feel as though I know the feelings you speak about. Very nice I like this poem brings more reasons for me to want to help others. Knowing that there are still things I don't understand but one thing for certain Earth and Mars had a relationship while one took all, the other was left branded, with all their history never forgotten. Mars serves Earth as inspiration yet memories of a long past, that no one really understands. In fact we humans live in accordance to that relationship they both had, imitating fruition sometimes on very selfish ways. But worry not as we all shall come to understanding of this by the equal pain in the darkness of our minds.